Our Final Plot. The One We Plan To Use.

After being creative thinking up idea's about what we could have as a plot, we were initially going to use Idea A, but we realised this is far to complex and complicated for a 2 minute opening and when thinking what we would use in our script and opening sequence we decided to simplify things so why not do the same with our plot. As we liked the idea of fast cuts which moved from one area to another we came up with this:

Overall, (Background and Context) There is a Girl and a Boy who used to be a couple, the boy cheated on the girl and now has a new girlfriend. His Ex was left distraught and went off the rails, she began stalking them, taking pictures of them and making a shrine on her wall of them together. The two minute opening is the Ex plotting to go out and kill them.

We will begin in the Ex's house. Looking in the mirror in her bedroom, putting red lip stick on, aligning weapons on her bed and staring at her shrine, then placing them in her bag ready to go out.

The camera will zoom into her bag with the knife in, then when it zooms out she will be out side with the bag on her shoulder, with the knife inside.

This setting will be in Towneley Park, Burnley. Where there is plenty of woodland and paths. There will be a series of shots of her walking and cuts of the shrine inbetween.

We will also cut away to Burnley General Hospital, where a women will ring the Ex. When she looks at her phone while walking it will say Hospital (shrink).

Then she comes to the couple, with the boy who she is in love with and his new girlfriend.

The film will cut back to her in her bedroom scribling with red marker on the shrine, all over the face of his new girlfriend. She will then Tear it down and we will cut back to his new girlfriend lead dead on the floor, with the murder, his ex walking away from the scene.

It can be argued that what is left for the rest of the film however, the fact that the love of her life, her Ex boyfriend is not to be seen and the Psychiatrist (shrink) knows that the girl didn't answer her phone for an important appointment shows that... there is still a storyline to go down. Also will she be caught? is what the audience can wonder....